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YEAHHHH ALICE GLOMPS ALEX

YOU IS SO JEALOUS, I SEE YOU :iconnotimpressedplz: I SEE YOU BEIN ALL JEALOUS, THERE'S NO HIDING IT.
THE JEALOUSY.


I spent...probably a total of 3-3.5 hours on this, lol. I started ittttttttttttttttt ummmmmmmmmm Sunday night. And then I brought it to school. lul. SO Sunday night I spent 1.5 hours on it. Thennnn I worked on it on and off at school.

..; Everyone that saw it said, quite loudly, "DID YOU DRAW THAT?!" and it got annoying DX like "YES, I'M SHADING IT, I DREW IT THANK YOU NOW STOP DRAWING ATTENTION TO IT."

Now I'm going to compile a walkthrough of how I constructed the basic sketch, on the hopes that you all will see what I'm screwing up with and help me improve YAY!

these two are mine, no stealystealy kk? WHEEEEEE

<edit>HOMAN, scanner killed it dead. sorry for the low quality .3.;;;;;; it's really...not this bad irl. ew.</edit>

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:iconomegablue69:
Aww man, I want a glomp!

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:iconkotta-kasai:
8D :glomp: !

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:iconomegablue69:
Yay! :w00t:

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:iconmeihdyn:
Holy cripes this is fantastic. o_o I see a ton of improvement, too - the faces seem more... natural, I suppose?

Alex's left hand (our right) kind of bothers me, though. I can't tell if he's holding onto something or if those lines coming from his hand are meant to be fingers - either way, it makes it seem like it's twisted in a bit of an odd way. His hands also look a bit too small for a male. D:

Umum... I JUST GAVE A SMALL CRIT BECAUSE IT SAID ADVANCED CRIT ENCOURAGED AND YEAH.

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:iconkotta-kasai:
DDD: Thanks! That's what my friend Emily said too (about the natural faces thing, that is).

Oh, wow XD you caught me. That was...really my worst point in the picture. Originally Alex had both his arms down, but I felt it was too...effeminate, ultimately. So, right after I've started shading Alice's face, I'm like "WHHHHHFT LET'S COMPLETELY CHANE HIS LEFT ARM'S POSITIONING." And thus, wheeeee. But yeah, good catch on that :XD: no reference, no reality, no nothing. It's bad.

DDDDDDDDDDD8 DOES YOU HAS BIGGER CRIT YES?

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:iconmeihdyn:
We had a mind connection, then. o: Not to mention the hair - the detail on it is drop dead gorgeous.

XD That would explain it, then. Having references for the majority of a picture and then going without it for something somewhat small can really stand out at times. Better than completely hiding it, though, so I'll give you props on that. :3

D8 MORE CRIT? Um... Well, Alex's vest is kind of bothering me, too. Even if it's supposed to be tighter, there would be "folds" and such in it. Very, very rarely is clothing just straight like that. His nose seems a bit too tilted to the left, too, though that might just be his face shape. :B
As for Alice... it might just be me, but her hand looks a tad like Barbie's. xD;

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:iconcaffeinated-freya:
freckles! 8D

I'm slow on favin' and commenting.

>.>

<.<

>.>

sorry
:iconkotta-kasai:
MAGIC LINE CONNECTION! 8OOOO awwwr thank you, hair is easier for me to do usually but I spent a lot of time trying to obtain a difference in tonalities.

rofl no references nada for this baby [I really should have though], but I know what you're talking about.

His bodice piece was very difficult to do; I'm still confused as to how I would put wrinkles in it. It's a very stiff material (but I suppose you're right, there would probably be more wrinkles than there is right now ^^; ).

...oh my...dude, you're totally right XDDD! I see where you're coming from, wow. I'll work on that. Thanks Ceej!!

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:iconkotta-kasai:
lol!

It's cool, Voot. <33 thank you for both, very much appreciated.

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